Tuesday, 20 December 2011

I haven't posted in a while, but I felt like starting a story and so it would only make sense that I should post it here. The paragraph is unfinished, but I am working on it...once I have tended to some of my art coursework. :)

A candle, a key and a quaint velvet pouch – the only things given to Jim, an orphan boy of thirteen, who fumbled down an unfamiliar road. Mrs Madon, the lender of the items and Jim’s carer, had relied on these three objects to serve as company for the boy rather than herself. The single flame clinging to the wick leapt up and dived down, jerked to the right and swung back round to the left, from the boy’s pace and the night’s wind. Once or twice he mistook the clap of his own footsteps for those of another and an instant surge of adrenalin would spin his head around to witness his company. There was never anyone there, just as Mrs Madon had said there would not be.
“The candle will help you see...” Her statement might have been obvious at the time of its announcement (the words had been spoken in a room cradled in firelight), but now in the midst of a deathly blackout, it seemed amazing that the dainty flame at the peak of the wax stick could cast a guiding glow along the glistened cobbles.
“In good time you will pass a short row of old wooden shacks. The lock on the door of the third house fits the key”
His left hand seemed to be getting colder and colder with every thought of the coming houses; only after these notions protruded had he realised his hand, tense and bitterly frigid, had been gradually and subconsciously tightening its grip on the metal key.
“You don’t need to enter the shack – all I need is nestled just beyond the door in the very corner of the wall. This will need to be stored in the bag.”
The scenery to Jim’s right was consistent, silent and deserted. His left however was beginning to change. The candlelight had leapt on the first entity there had been for yards – it was the first shack, ghostly and lopsided. Following every step, the orange blaze of the candle crawled hungrily up its splintery foundations, as if it were an excitable dog, begging to go faster, restrained on a lead of firelight under Jim’s control. 

Sunday, 30 October 2011

Monologue #2

Another piece of potential coursework that did not make it to the teacher!



I’m so annoyed! Yesterday was a complete and utter disaster! One would have thought the aristocratic garden party at Daddy’s manor house would have easily sustained a mature environment but obviously I was mistaken! It just baffles me how people with such polished exteriors can show what complete baboons they are after a glass of wine. It’s not as though we’re living in the nineteenth century – this is nineteen fifteen for goodness sake!
I should have seen it coming – the afternoon was doomed from the moment my grand entrance failed to impress because father’s butler was entertaining the guests with his impression of a possessed goose. Of course I might have found it slightly humorous if it weren’t for the fact the novelty had already worn off after he had tried it in the dining room but ended up choking on his cufflink. That stupid man is constantly stealing my thunder.
And the head house maid...oh my goodness the shame, my cheeks burn at the mere thought. They knew this was my special afternoon yet clumsy Maggie still managed to trip over a stool and send a wine glass flying in Lady Garnet’s face. The poor old bat is sixty four and I’ll tell you now, those scars will vanish long before her nostrils stop flaring angrily. They were nothing compared to her expression though; somewhere between bleeding where the glass shards had hit her and blue in the face from wailing she looked as though she was ready to throttle the next person who cried “Oh Mrs Garnet are you all right?”
She certainly didn’t look alright, but I suppose her nose did that thing where it screws up when she’s trying to show emotion, so on the bright side we did get a familiar response from her.
Father was most excited that Sir Arthur Eccleston made his appearance – he’s a Lord, you know. Maggie thought she’d make him feel welcome by personally offering him an egg and cress finger sandwich; it had obviously slipped her mind the man is lactose intolerant, but not to worry, we got him breathing again in the end...even if he did wheeze a lot after speaking.
It’s hard not to feel sorry for me really...I put so much effort into making myself seem respectable and the blunders of a few idiotic people cast a shadow of humiliation upon me. The day wasn’t all wasted I suppose as I did receive many complements concerning my dress, though it’s hard to accelerate your ego when you faint soon after because Maggie fastened your garment too tight when she dressed you in the morning. Father actually snapped at me and crudely suggested that if I wasn’t satisfied I should get off my...and dress myself, which I thought was quite rich coming from a man who won’t even pour his own cereal.
Enough about all of that though, I’d rather just put it all to bed now. I mean, what are the chances of having ditsy and attention seeking house staff? Whatever I do, I mustn’t blame any of it on myself...I’m not exactly hard work!

Monologue

I was originally going to use this for my coursework this year but I decided on another topic. Anyway, I still have it saved so I thought I would share it (:

I was just a privileged child, brought up in a flamboyant home. Of course I took everything for granted; flurries of maids and butlers scurrying around my home was the norm for me. They’d fret until they turned green if they’d forgotten to fluff a pillow, but what did it matter to me? I used to think them silly panicking over the smallest of things – I mean, if I’d dropped a fork onto the carpet I’d hardly have been scolded for it! Who was I to know, the spoilt little heiress prancing proudly around daddy’s spacious manor house.
I’m relieved to say my knowledge of the world wasn’t all jaded by deliciously jewelled chandeliers and generic portraits of important people; I mean I frequently saw the town, all thanks to the house keeper Mrs Rawton. Oh she was good to me, making sure my spoilt little head was fixed on the right way at least sometimes, leading me across the cobbles of reality.
I was sixteen when the War came, hardly frightened out of my wits though I must admit. I thought it was hilarious the day the kitchen maid scrambled through the ballroom wheezing and bawling; I’d believed it undeniably ridiculous of her – what was the threat when we were so safe inside the mansion? The thing itself was worth over a billion so it was bound to be protective for goodness sake.
I’d been banned from entering the town due to bomb threats for at least three months. Mrs Rawton did eventually lead me tightly by the hand out of our front gates soon after, much to my mother’s disapproval; but even she couldn’t argue against my father’s opinions and his tone of finality: ‘It’ll do her good!’
 It did more than that.
There was a little girl curled up in a ball outside the bakers; she was crying because her father had been killed in a bomb attack at War. I saw a man feeling his way along shop walls, stumbling here and there on a cobble. His sight had been snatched during a gas attack. For a moment he glanced my way and his milky eyes, though blinded, seemed to gaze into mine with pity, as though it were I who needed saving. They were wrecked at the hands of our enemies.
I remember the man on the bench, the man in the muddy brown uniform, eyes fixated on the floor. Those eyes had no doubt seen horrors enough to etch themselves into the mind forever; had he seen his friends die? I don’t know.
The world had changed since I had last stepped out of the house and I hadn’t even noticed...
I’ve changed dramatically since then. The Victorian brat who would pester the cook for night time sweet foods is only a shameful memory. Life no longer revolves around how generously my jewellery sits along my collarbone, or how tight my garments are. It never will again.  

Thursday, 27 October 2011

Story clippings

During the months surfacing around my year 12 coursework last year I, being the perfectionist I am, started and abandoned many stories, each holding the potential to make it successfully to the teacher's desk. One of them I particularly enjoyed writing; it was peaceful, serene, but held no obvious link to any article ideas I also needed to conjure. 
This is an unfinished piece. 


The crevices sculpted carelessly into the cliff face served as vast, shadowed spy holes; to what, Aires was not certain. Today, he did not awknowledge them however, but scanned his eyes drowsily across the bloody sky that gulped the landscape in a pink haze. The ocean, distanced enough for Aries to be able to imprison it between two outstretched fingers, rolled rhythmically across a mass of soaked sand, drawing back moments later, to repeat the process mournfully. Every time a particularly determined wave collided with a stubborn rock, sprinkles of salt water propelled into the air, glinting in the rising sun like spits of orange flame. This place, lonely, isolated and haunting served as the perfect place to hide what lay inside his tent.

After slowly flexing his shoulder muscles and releasing a deep, satisfying breath, he lazily raised himself from the frigid rock and turned, examining his small, stout and hopefully temporary home. Tension sidled through his fingers as he cautiously approached the tent and carefully tugged at the zip. It was almost impossible to enter without having to crouch awkwardly which Aires proved; even by bowing his head a considerable amount, the distraction of attempting to appear unnoticed caused his foot to stumble on his rumpled sleeping bag. Doing his best to mute his breaths, he peered at his right leg extending out of the mouth hole and slowly drew it inside. Against the far right hand corner, a selection of old matted blankets and a sleeping bag lay in a settled clump. A few wisps of dazzling silver hair protruded from somewhere within the bundle. Not even the reddish glow the crimson tent emitted from the dawning blaze of the sun weakened its bright image.

The bundle stirred and Aries froze. Seconds later his hand groped inside his trouser pocket and his fingers clasped around the subject he had found not far from the cliff’s edge. The silent atmosphere was pierced with the muffled wail of a seagull and the boy, throwing an angry look in the direction of the disturbance, slinked to the edge of the tent, closer to the subject of his interest. The Unicorn nestled within the protective blankets was the size of a large cat and prior to Aries’ first encounter with it, he hadn’t even imagined that such beauty could exist. Curls of thick, silver hair fell down its back creating a shimmering mane and tail. Its horn was merely a pearly stump but nevertheless, the overall effect was baffling. The boy crept closer, intrigued but fearful; he did not dare touch it as not to contaminate it and each step that brought them closer together brought with it the dread he might ruin its innocence. The dirty, mangled materials it rested upon clashed horribly against the calf.

As he continued his mesmerising stare, the creature’s small, white eyelids raised and two large glassy eyes regarded him with fatigue. Aires blinked and withdrew his hand from his pocket, placing his outstretched fingertips close to the Unicorn. A plum, which had insulated heat from his sweaty hand, rolled onto the fabric and biffed the creature’s nose lightly. The boy carried on gawping as its marble eyes darted to the fruit and the stunning head retreated back slightly. The Unicorn had not eaten since Aires had found it, lost deep within the cavity in a cliff half a mile down the beach; He therefore unfortunately had no idea of what its diet could possibly consist of.
“No?” He breathed, and its tiny head jerked upwards, apparently startled by the sound.


Sunday, 11 September 2011

Scraps of the past

So I was searching through old pencil cases for a rubber and found two ripped out sheets from a notebook I once had, containing notes of what seems to be a poem I was working on. I do warn you there are a couple of annoying grammatical errors, but I will inform you at the time this was written I was about thirteen...
As you will see below, 'rizes' should be 'rises' and 'it's murky' needs to be 'its murky'.
Other than that, I found them rather interesting!

Wednesday, 31 August 2011

Beyond the Gate - Part 1

I've decided to write a story and post it in parts - enjoy!


Long, pained groans emanated from beneath Minnie's chilly feet as she crept warily along the dark wooden floorboards, emphasized along the glossy oak walls. A few feet ahead of her, a splatter of torchlight lay spilt across the floor, oozing along the surface controlled by her grip. She saw her desired destination when her wrist directed the torchlight in ascent at the stretched, arched window plastered against the far end of the wall. 
It took the young girl at least five minutes to travel the limited distance before her - she could not be disruptive. As she approached the silvery glass, her breath caught unexpectedly in her throat - the adrenalin that was now creeping through her body was probably unnecessary, but as her gaze scanned the depths of the vast inky garden, fear swelled inside of her. It was as though she was observing a dark twisted jungle, witnessing its features from a separate world - the world behind the glass. The garden was composed into two parts; the first, and closest to the  house, was prim, well kept and regularly nourished. The second loomed beyond an old battered gate and appeared as though it hadn't seen a pruner in decades. Minnie hadn't been given a fair amount of advice by her parents growing up and no matter how little time they had to fully interact with her, they had not failed to present her with one memorable, daunting warning: "NEVER go through the garden gate."
Her young eyes swept across the neat garden, the garden she often spent hours in on a warm day, propelling the dog's ball across the lawn and shrieking with giggles as he pelted across the grass and flew into bushes where it had landed. The memory aroused her with content and for a moment, her fear was extinguished; but soon, she had subconsciously began staring dreamily at the forbidden part and as the realisation tugged her back to reality, she began to feel uneasy once more. It was as though the bottom of the garden had swallowed every last drop of moonlight and in its place was secreting a sinister swamp of ebony darkness, cradling every corner, every twisted branch... 
That was when Minnie saw it. She would have been a fool to dismiss it as a bird or a squirrel or a rabbit; for a moment, the pair of intrusive eyes that glowed passionately as the torchlight hit them pondered her own, distantly...then they bulged slightly, as though their occupant had begun to smile wickedly. The world beyond the window was plunged into deep darkness as the torch in Minnie's hand eagerly escaped her sweaty grasp and clattered noisily to the floor. Like all the other branches, vines and weeds, coiled in jagged patterns, the mysterious pair of eyes had become lost in the gloom. 

Sunday, 28 August 2011

A day in York

Not long ago, I attended York St John's university open day, which I loved, and was given the chance to wander around the city itself. For those of you who haven't been, York is extremely beautiful as the city balances between old and modern. Personally, I prefer the older outlook to the streets, taking a swift liking to one in particular called The Shambles
I speak in truth when I say this tight, cobbled walkway resembles Diagon Alley from the Harry Potter films, and not because I really like the franchise - in fact, it was my mum who originally voiced this opinion from when she visited a couple of weeks prior; I merely agreed...excitedly. 
The street is home to a number of diverse shops, snuggled cosily and firmly along its path. It was in one of these shops I purchased, and eagerly consumed, one of the most impressive ice - creams I have ever had - so wonderful that with each step it was made, my glittering eyes rarely left its transformation.                       
Five words will always remain warmly in my mind each time I  reminisce, the five words which were thrust upon me by the counter girl doing her job, enough to make anyone feel light - headed:
"White, milk or dark chocolate?" No, she was not on about the ice - cream, she was on about the sauce - the warm gloopy chocolate that painted the top of the cone, the sauce that so generously landed on the ice - cream and blanketed the scoop. The 100 percent chocolate stick made it perfect -  and yes, it was delicious, minus the slight problem that when biting into the increasingly solidifying chocolate, it threatened to tug the rest of the ice - cream off with it. 
The shops were lovely - small and generally unknown. I like the latter qualities found in those selective shops as it gives them a unique edge. There was one in particular which had been bathed in a very feminine perfume and appeared as though a jewellery monster had spat in every corner. There's no doubt however, this shop was pretty and had my attention grasped from the start; my mum eventually turfed us out. 

                                                                                                     
                                                                                            This image probably doesn't do the 
                                                                                                                                           brilliant ice - cream a great deal of               
                                                                                                                                           justice, but by the time I had taken this 
                                                                                                                                          picture, it had suffered a few licks and 
                                                                                                                                          the chocolate had already fully 
                                                                                                                                          hardened :P